ai ai ai... this is honestly lonesome. Hope you feel better soon... or stop missing it so much...

know how you feel m'dear....it sucks to be alone a remember what you once had

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-Oh, my baby, when you're older...-

I have , do you?

I'm just a random person that can realate, it really makes me miss her...eh I love the poem by the way. ^_^

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You cant see the cow, it's in my head

yeah...but its good to feel though.

i love the poem jess. i hope everything turns out and you find someone who actually treats you right.

Cant miss what youve never had, right? Wrong! I miss it too!

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Poignant. We've all lost (at least) someone dear for whom we've held romantic attachments- aspirations- futures, perhaps. I like how this piece heavily uses the alliterative 's' to evoke sensuality in a nearly animalistic primacy. I like how in the first three stanzas you structure the lines visually so that the audience experiences a sense of lying down with your [lost] lover, taking up your shape and your pleasure. Likewise, how the fourth stanza eclipses yet summons the closing line is deeply pleasurable.

I almost feel bad trying to nitpick grammatical convention, because it's a singly cozy piece - but I do think you want to use a possessive in the penultimate line.

I know I'm a poet, but I write free verse. So what, in gods name, is a penultimate line.

Second to last line.